How to Become a Great Writer--John Updike's Secrets of Success

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By Ralph Deeds

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John Updike's Secrets of Success Revealed After His Death

Until he died at 76 in 2009 John Updike led a very private life except for what he revealed about himself in his fifty-odd years of prolific writing--novels, poetry, essays, criticism. After his death, a meticulous archive of his life's work was left to Harvard's Houghton Library. The archive reveals much about Updike's life and his approach to writing. Included in the collection is his voluminous correspondence with his family, friends and editors. Updike's plan to be a writer began when he was in high school and continued as he worked on his first novel as a student at Harvard where rejections and criticism of his work by others didn't dampen his determination to write.

A small town public high school graduate competing with New England preppies, Updike was fearful of losing his scholarship and wrote home that he was "somewhat of a grind." He finished ninth in his class and graduated summa cum laude. The archive revealed that he continued to be a "grind" until his death in 2009. His work combined artistic intelligence and human understanding with meticulous research which provided authenticity to his work. For example, the archive contains pages from medical texts describing heart disease and surgery on which his clinically precise description of Rabbit Angstrom's angioplasty was based. He did similar research on car dealers for his passages about the family Toyota dealership in Rabbit Run and on basketball moves which enabled him to write convincingly about Rabbit's high school exploits on the basketball court.

The archive reveals disputes over Updike's publisher, Alfred Knopf's, urgings that he remove the explicit sex scenes from his first successful novel, "Rabbit Run." Updike correspondence showed how unhappy he was to be forced to tone down the sex scenes when Knopf refused to publish the book out of fear of legal censorship challenges. Not long after, obscenity standards were relaxed and the expurgated passages restored. Updike carefully pasted the restored portions into an early edition of the book which is now part of the Houghton Library collection.

Updike believed that a successful writer should pay close attention to his own time and place and not become infatuated with European modernist writers like Proust and Joyce, writing to his parents when he was only 19--

"This age needs rather men like Shakespeare or Milton, or Pope; men who are filled with the strength of their cultures and do not transcend the limits of their age, but, working within the times, bring what is peculiar to the moment to glory. We need great artists who are willing to accept restrictions, and who love their environments with such vitality that they can produce an epic out of the Protestant ethic...Whatever the failings of my work, let it stand as a manifesto of my love for the time in which I was born."

Updike followed this early observation in his most successful novels which dealt with the life and times of Rabbit Angstrom whose life peaked as a star high school basketball player and was mostly downhill thereafter.

Materials in the archive belie Updike's reputation as a naturally fluent writer whose success came early and easily. They show that his work was scorned by Archibald MacLeish and other Harvard professors and the early rejections he received from The Atlantic and Harper's as well as his early successes at The Harvard Lampoon and The New Yorker. Updike meticulously retained and documented his many drafts and revisions which preceded the publication of his wititng and which produced the finished work which was so popular and critically acclaimed.

Updike's advice to aspiring writers may be summed up as follows: don't be discouraged by early rejections; write honestly about your time and place; include carefully detailed and researched descriptions; revise, rewrite and revise again until you have perfectly achieved your objective.

[I am indebted to the article linked below by Sam Tannenhaus in the NY Times, June 20, 2010. The article is interesting and worth reading in its entirety.]

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Ginn Navarre Level 1 Commenter 23 months ago

Enjoyed this, for those that can not learn from criticism an or rejection will not succeed as a writer. This man learned this and therefore became as we all know a great writer.

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Ralph Deeds Hub Author 23 months ago

Thanks for your comment. Updike is one of my favorites.

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breakfastpop Level 8 Commenter 23 months ago

Very interesting article ralph. I agree with Updike's view of rejection. Gone With the Wind was rejected a million times. Pity the people that turned it down.

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Coolmon2009 Level 4 Commenter 23 months ago

I enjoyed your article. I learned a few things I didn't know about him before.

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msorensson Level 3 Commenter 23 months ago

I loved the Rabbit series :-)

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Petra Vlah Level 3 Commenter 23 months ago

This is a great article Ralph and perfect for a community of writers interested to learn the road to success from the very best. Thank you, Sir

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cajunrooster 23 months ago

Hey Mr. Ralph, this was a great hub as usual. I am coming to the writing life kind of late, but I read as much as I can by great writers and about great writers. I am fine with the rejection part of the deal. From every rejection I get I learn and it usually teaches me a good lesson. Also, I am friendly with editors and such and they usually help me out with great advice and such. Thanks for the great hub.

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Ralph Deeds Hub Author 23 months ago

Thanks, all for your kind comments.

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FCEtier 23 months ago

I need to read more of his work. Nice article Ralph!

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HubCrafter 23 months ago

"revise, rewrite and revise again"...great advice from a wonderfully creative author.

chasingcars 23 months ago

The only losers are those who don't get back up when they are knocked down. It's wonderful to read the thoughts of good writers and researchers like yourself. Thanks, Ralph.

George Nagle 23 months ago

Thank you, Ralph, for this.

I know of no writer who is more perceptive and accurate in describing our times than Updike. He is often disquieting. He brings to my attention parts of our world that through ignorance or denial I pretend aren't there. This, of course, can enlarge my vision.

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KoffeeKlatch Gals Level 6 Commenter 23 months ago

John Updike has always been one of my favorite authors. Nice work.

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Lamme 23 months ago

A writer puts himself in the line of fire. He/she needs to learn and grow from criticism ... or ignore it, but never hide from it.

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Ralph Deeds Hub Author 23 months ago

Very true. I remember writing for my high school newspaper which was overseen by an excellent teacher who took it upon herself to very carefully edit everything we wrote. Her re-writes of my early articles were painful, but I came to recognize that they were not arbitrary but rather were significant improvements. I learned a lot in two years of being edited by an outstanding teacher and writer who insisted that our articles be near-perfect before the paper went to press.

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websclubs 23 months ago

Successful Freelance writer should pay close attention to his own time- I agree with advice given... Nice article useful information. Thanks

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wingedcentaur Level 5 Commenter 20 months ago

Good Day Ralp Deeds

I voted this hub up for useful. This was a well structured, intelligent, passionate tribute to a great writer who died too early. I was most impressed by his view of what makes a great writer, which at first seems somewhat counterintuitive: be thoroughly imbued of your own time and place. Do not try to be 'transcendent' (in a way that signals bad writing). You may find that you can achieve transcendence by being firmly where you are!

Well done!

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Ralph Deeds Hub Author 20 months ago

Thanks for you kind comment. I've been an Updike fan since "Rabbit Run."

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Fareehaarif 17 months ago

Thanks a lot Sir for this great article and these useful information for writers also for me.

Thanks again Sir.

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Ralph Deeds Hub Author 17 months ago

Thanks for your comment. Good luck with your writing!

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N.E. Wright 13 months ago

Hello Ralph,

This was a great, and extremely informative read.

I truly enjoyed it.

I thank you so much for sharing this.

I will share this on my Face-Book page, and with my other followers.

Take Care,

N.E.

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Ralph Deeds Hub Author 13 months ago

Thank the late John Updike.

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N.E. Wright 13 months ago

You are correct sir.

Still, I thank you for sharing this information I did not know before reading this article of yours.

Take Care,

N.E.

Forrest Greenwood 12 months ago

Don't give up and revise revise seem at oposite ends of the candle. Updike - one of the very best prose stylists - ultimately didn't have much meat on the bone. I doubt, for instance, he would ever piss off his porch at the headlights of unwanted cars as Faulkner reportedly did. But . . . he was special.

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Ralph Deeds Hub Author 12 months ago

Forrest, thanks for your perceptive comment.

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Ralph Deeds Hub Author 6 months ago

How Updike Judged--"Higher Gossip"

"Higher Gossip" John Updike

It is the fate of some writers to be accused of writing too well. In one form or another, the charge has been lodged against authors as different as Vladimir Nabokov (too clever), Richard Wilbur (too elegant) and Garry Wills (too authoritative). But among major American literary figures of recent times, John Updike is the one about whom the complaint (too fluent, too lavish, too prolific) is most common.

http://www.nytimes.com/2011/11/13/books/review/hig

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snakeslane Level 7 Commenter 5 months ago

Thanks for insights into John Updike, and latest offerings to come out of his archives. Seems the work of a writer is never done. Regards, snakeslane

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Ralph Deeds Hub Author 5 months ago

Thanks for your comment. I read Updike's first novel when it was publicshed, and I've been a fan ever since.

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Wizard Of Whimsy 5 months ago

You have a generous nature, Ralph Deeds—thanks!

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Wizard Of Whimsy 5 months ago

“If you have any young friends who aspire to become writers, the second greatest favor you can do them is to present them with copies of The Elements of Style. The first greatest, of course, is to shoot them now, while they’re happy.” - Dorothy Parker

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Ralph Deeds Hub Author 5 months ago

That's good advice. I have a copy and I've given each of my kids copies. It's the writer's Bible. The original style book of the Kansas City Star where Hemingway worked as a reporter is also a good source.

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marwan asmar Level 4 Commenter 5 weeks ago

Very nice piece Ralph. I've always heard of Updike, now is the time to read him!

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